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Poem - Like water - Digital Download

Poem - Like water - Digital Download

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In the poem, the speaker beautifully explores the metaphor of water to convey a sense of fluidity, adaptability, and gratitude. The speaker likens themselves to water, flowing with precision and respect, finding momentary happiness in a crystal chalice. The inability to hold water symbolises the transient nature of life's prizes. The speaker's waves are described as gentle and moisturising, never overwhelming like a gale or deluge. The fluidity of water is reflected in the speaker's ability to take different shapes and embrace all colours.
The speaker emphasises a lack of baggage, assumptions, and promises, choosing to travel light with a focus on the present. The kiss of water is portrayed as tempting, trialling, and giving, with a profound connection between giving and receiving. The liquidity of water represents strength, vulnerability, and the offering of a metaphorical baton. The imagery of drinking, sweating, and evaporating illustrates the cyclical nature of experiences.
Water's ability to inspire and nurture is highlighted, symbolising the speaker's impact on others. The speaker, like water, has no roots in others' gardens, ensuring they do not become weeds. The symbolic tree flourishes in its soil, reflecting independence and self-sufficiency.
The poem concludes with gratitude for the words flowing like water, a gift received through a beautiful dance with someone who has gifted the speaker a metaphorical canyon.

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